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taffy
07-29-2010, 05:20 PM
The last one from my evening shooting the pier.

Not sure if I should have done more to highlight the buildings at the end of the pier.

Comments welcome.

Taffy:)

Mad Aussie
07-30-2010, 02:06 AM
What a very cool pier!! Such character.

I thin kthis could benefit from some levels adjustment to both brighten the brights and darken the darks to create more colour and contrast.
The top right corner looks just a little cut off to me. I think it needed more space up there or to be cut tighter.
Possibly could do with some sharpening.
Part from that ... excellent photo. :)

Iguanasan
07-30-2010, 07:53 AM
I saw the other two first. I like the composition on this one better. The end of the pier is pretty close to one of the thirds and the eye is lead across the beach and down the pier which is cool. If you had the composition of this one with the exposure and adjustments that MA is talking about it would be a good combination.

Marko
07-30-2010, 10:00 AM
I agree with MA here - fab shot but needs extra leveling/curves. This extra leveling will let the shot sing much louder imo.