Barbed wire....

I thought the lines looked kind of interesting with the colours.
Comments, ideas, suggestions and thoughts welcome....

I like the selective focus here; aside from that unfortunately i think you missed the shot. The only "star" in this shot is the barbed wire and yet you included other elements that confuse the shot IMO. For me I ask myself what is the shot about? ...and do the other elements in the shot contribute to it. If they don't, then the shot should be recomposed. (You asked...:))
I should say the colour palette you've chosen IS nice as well - but the shot isn't about the colour palette either right.
Hope that helps
Marko

I think marko pretty well said it. Another shot, different composition. I just find it hard to see.

Thanks Marko, I asked :) because I wasn't sure if I got it...I had a feeling I missed it cuz it didn't quite look right to me but I guess I hoped maybe I was wrong....I guess I'm getting better at analyzing this stuff than I realize.

You are going about this in the right way. Post - ask - learn.

It's very difficult sometimes to see the "faults" in our own work and yet we often find it simple to find the faults in the work of others....

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Originally Posted by marko

You are going about this in the right way. Post - ask - learn.

It's very difficult sometimes to see the "faults" in our own work and yet we often find it simple to find the faults in the work of others....

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Hmmm..isn't that the truth

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Originally Posted by marko

You are going about this in the right way. Post - ask - learn.

It's very difficult sometimes to see the "faults" in our own work and yet we often find it simple to find the faults in the work of others....

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Which is really weird, because in most other things, we are usually our own biggest critics....Some food for thought, I guess.

It was a nice try, Casil :o Live and learn, eh?